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Old 15-05-09, 14:39
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Default Nightingale's Hymn

The lavender sky kisses the earth
As the Nightingale starts to hum
The sweetest tunes of tenderness-
A soulful serenade.

The music sheet’s still unblemished
Keynotes, about to be revealed
Enchanted time- now stands still
To listen to a masterpiece.

With eyes alive in an inner world-
the Nightingale bowed to behold
While nocturne souls could hardly wait
For grand citation to begin
.

Taking the stage in purposeful strides
The Nightingale’s voice comes to life
Some unsung sighs suddenly pour
Along with these unspoken words-

Could it happen if
faith prevails
If it is written-
signed, and sealed;
Would unborn seeds of
promised bliss
Sprout and grow amidst the heat?


Indeed, sweet echoes rule the night
Accolades aimed to glorify-
to show the treasures from within
Love's offering- the Nightingale’s hymns.


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Old 15-05-09, 14:56
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A voice of pure serene,
so glad to be in this
audience,

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Old 15-05-09, 15:15
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Hi G, :-) thank you. I've been enjoying a serene, moon-filled evening when the inspiration for this one came to mind. :-)

all the best,
Jane :-)
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Old 15-05-09, 16:44
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loved the images you painted... visualizing the nightingale's purposeful strides
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loved the images you painted... visualizing the nightingale's purposeful strides
glad you liked it john, :-) cheers!
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Dripping - You are a master at taking us someplace beautiful!

This is BEAUTIFUL!!
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Certainly an accolade for this poem Nightingale, such a complete and wonderful piece of writing, I enjoyed reading this very much.

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Dripping - You are a master at taking us someplace beautiful!

This is BEAUTIFUL!!
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Hello Elle, thanks again my dear, :-)
Well, :-)... its fascinating sometimes how the mind can create something that illuminates the ideal- where the soul can find rest and be refreshed- glad to share it with you all, :-)

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Certainly an accolade for this poem Nightingale, such a complete and wonderful piece of writing, I enjoyed reading this very much.

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The pleasure is mine Andrew, glad you liked it, :-)

cheers!
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as grand a song as ever been sung, and your beautiful thoughts are spectacular in this write.

It is as the star filled sky on this your gifted night itself.

There is just no telling where your perseverance will take us all.
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