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The lavender sky kisses the earth As the Nightingale starts to hum The sweetest tunes of tenderness- A soulful serenade. The music sheet’s still unblemished Keynotes, about to be revealed Enchanted time- now stands still To listen to a masterpiece. With eyes alive in an inner world- the Nightingale bowed to behold While nocturne souls could hardly wait For grand citation to begin. Taking the stage in purposeful strides The Nightingale’s voice comes to life Some unsung sighs suddenly pour Along with these unspoken words- Could it happen if faith prevails If it is written- signed, and sealed; Would unborn seeds of promised bliss Sprout and grow amidst the heat? Indeed, sweet echoes rule the night Accolades aimed to glorify- to show the treasures from within Love's offering- the Nightingale’s hymns. ©2009leofinajanegalleta All Rights Reserved. Last edited by drippingmind : 15-05-09 at 15:13. Reason: uhmmn, just to fix the tangled lines.. |
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A voice of pure serene,
so glad to be in this audience, G
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Hi G, :-) thank you. I've been enjoying a serene, moon-filled evening when the inspiration for this one came to mind. :-)
all the best, Jane :-) |
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loved the images you painted... visualizing the nightingale's purposeful strides ![]()
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Dripping - You are a master at taking us someplace beautiful!
This is BEAUTIFUL!! Eagel21 - Elle
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Certainly an accolade for this poem Nightingale, such a complete and wonderful piece of writing, I enjoyed reading this very much.
Andrew |
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Well, :-)... its fascinating sometimes how the mind can create something that illuminates the ideal- where the soul can find rest and be refreshed- glad to share it with you all, :-) Warmest, Jane |
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cheers! Jane |
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as grand a song as ever been sung, and your beautiful thoughts are spectacular in this write.
It is as the star filled sky on this your gifted night itself. There is just no telling where your perseverance will take us all.
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