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Old 24-05-09, 16:14
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For you- I am
the rainbow’s grace
you wish to see after the rain
like hopeful signs- your world’s delight
Yet nothing but, an ephemeral sight.


You’ve said- I am the gentle breeze
a touch in passing, felt but unseen-
a lightning’s kiss sent in a flash
a dream before awakening.


Maybe I am- but a
seeker of light destined to
weave these untold rhymes- the
keeper of unspoken lines.


And, I have known
that dreams are just dreams, and
that wishes are tales, like thoughts-
never ending.



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Poetry is timeless- eternal. The beauty of this art lies on its fluidity, which is something that I can relate to myself- Poetry and I will always be “works in progress”. Thus, I recreated one of my previous works- this one is derived from an old poem of mine- “Whispers Through the Wind
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Old 24-05-09, 16:21
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these shining tapestries
so skillfully woven
come alive and dance
through my soul...thanks jc
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Old 24-05-09, 16:23
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glad you liked it jc, thanks a lot, :-)

cheers,
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Old 24-05-09, 17:52
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Jane, beautiful poem...
seems wistful almost, as if in hearing the words and knowing the want you can't really believe they are anything more than passing wishes or sweet dreams.

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Old 26-05-09, 15:32
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Jane, beautiful poem...
seems wistful almost, as if in hearing the words and knowing the want you can't really believe they are anything more than passing wishes or sweet dreams.

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Hello John, :-)- guess I exposed myself with this one, lol!!

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For you- I am

the rainbow’s grace
you wish to see after the rain
like hopeful signs- your world’s delight
Yet nothing but, an ephemeral sight.



You’ve said- I am the gentle breeze

a touch in passing, felt but unseen-
a lightning’s kiss sent in a flash
a dream before awakening.



Maybe I am- but a

seeker of light destined to
weave these untold rhymes- the
keeper of unspoken lines.



And, I have known

that dreams are just dreams, and
that wishes are tales, like thoughts-
never ending.




©2009leofinajanegalleta

All Rights Reserved.




Note:

Poetry is timeless- eternal. The beauty of this art lies on its fluidity, which is something that I can relate to myself- Poetry and I will always be “works in progress”. Thus, I recreated one of my previous works- this one is derived from an old poem of mine- “Whispers Through the Wind

this ending is killer, so well done
me thinks you know much more...

Bravo Poet

falc~
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Old 26-05-09, 15:41
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-Hi Jon! :-) Thank you, so very much! :-)- have to rush this time, lol! see you around, :-) *uhm, maybe Jon, i may know a little bit more- guess am just too stubborn to "see it as it is", lol
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Jane~
What a gorgeous poem~
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Wow. This is simply adorable. Well, it is beyond that. But I can't find the words to give it justice. I like this a lot.
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What a gorgeous poem~
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