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12-05-09, 09:21
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Recently, I took a step wider- wiser. Though I can’t see the future, I sent my silent voice to seek, and to plead for a gift of time with you. You must have heard me and you came home- my soul, at last had finally known-me. (c)2009leofinajanegalleta All Rights Reserved. Last edited by drippingmind : 12-05-09 at 11:06. Reason: just a little more tweaking on the last part... 
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12-05-09, 12:31
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most excellent introspective poem
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 Cherokee Prayer Blessing May the Warm Winds of Heaven Blow softly upon your house. May the Great Spirit Bless all who enter there. May your Mocassins Make happy tracks in many snows, and may the Rainbow Always touch your shoulder.  
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12-05-09, 14:40
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So few words with so much impact
A most excellent piece Hugs Lynn
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13-05-09, 08:59
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13-05-09, 08:59
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13-05-09, 09:03
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13-05-09, 09:05
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13-05-09, 17:15
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Interesting piece. I'm debating if you're talking about another person or you knowing yourself, but then, such is the beauty of poems sometimes, being open to interpretations. Nicely writ.
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