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Old 05-05-09, 14:49
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Who am I
to be loved and
to be showered with
divine graces- the wondrous
gift of enthralled glimpses
that I only have to
touch with
my eyes.

Because-
far beyond
most brilliant words
are enthralling specks
magnified- beyond
sights of blissful
moments that
consumed
my soul.

Sights-that
I’ve always tried to
catch with my eyes-
like a dream that merely
passes through, and
my hands won’t
even dare
to touch.

I am
indeed, is- but
a living part of
those tiny specks-
lost in the vastness of
the universe, yet I
feel loved- and
I love.

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Old 05-05-09, 20:37
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Excellent poem.
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Nice write Jane... though we seem tiny in the universe love still moves us
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wonderful poem
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So Beautiful Dripping!!
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much enjoyed your thoughts of the specks, and the reaching for the intangible, that slips between the realms of that which lies within our sight, just inside our dreams
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indeed we all are but specks of a larger whole...woah...in depth and introspection your vision is unhinged ....a wonderous read still whirling...a great write
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Nice write Jane... though we seem tiny in the universe love still moves us
hello john, thank you so much, :-).
yes, every single thing matters-
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